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很好的平台,重要的是多练习,多坚持!期待有套餐!

57 学分

2014-08-30 19:33:27 来自: danielztt 和他聊聊 楼主

没想到,在这里的批改每一次都是很详细的。我在这里一共改过8篇作文。不过自己的考试还是作文没有上6. 其实每次会犯不少同样的错误。老师都会细心的说出来,时态的,选词不当的。等等。建议是用79的批改,或者你可以加69的范文重写或是不用。因为39的(有时29)只是一些评价和分数,你还有很多问题并没有得到解决。在新东方的实体课程上,并没有机会得到老师批改作文。而我更是希望 每篇作文能有老师给出写作思路 有时自己的素材总是太少。

这一次我是一篇自己命题的,不是题库里的雅思作文。是说用动物做实验是不是残忍,有没有其他解决办法。我就简单的说 有的动物天生就可用来做实验,而且和人很相似,人的生命又很宝贵等等。可是一直说不出好的,而且解决办法上也想不出。而老师给的建议让我豁然开朗。他说:

You were asked if there were any alternatives to animal experimentation, yet you only provided one suggestion. This suggestion was also not particularly feasible, as it related to a future possibility rather than offering a current solution. It may interest you to know that many people in the West suggest that prisoners should be used for experimentation rather than animals! Also, please have a look at some of the following views on the topic of animal testing: “I do not think animal experimentation can be justified for cosmetics and other trivial uses. Also, I am aware that there are metabolic and biochemical differences between the various species on this planet (humans included). This weakens the case for the use of animal testing. However when it comes to medical research the question becomes murkier, animals should not have to suffer unnecessarily, but if the result is that a few lab animals die in order to provide a cure for crippling or fatal conditions I'm cautiously in favour. The real issue for me is really about the alternatives to animal testing, if cultured tissues rather than a living animal will provide the same quality of data we should use that method. Until practical affordable methods have been funded many research projects have little choice in their methods, but humane treatment of animals should come first.” 

说到了在欧洲可能用重犯来做实验等等,还有人与动物新陈代谢等等不同来考虑。所以很感谢老师的热情,我不知道是不是有同样的老师给我改,感觉快认识我了。不过,我很希望有套餐,因为每次想多改一些,一次要等三天左右。所以有套餐有优惠,会有机会练习更多。总之,谢谢这个平台。还会继续努力,也希望老师能更加负责的为大家改好作文!希望这次雅思能过了!


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100699 学分

2014-09-18 18:00:07 来自: koopigai 和他聊聊 沙发

  非常感谢你的反馈!

  我们也在计划推出批改套餐,让同学们改作文更实惠一些, 知道大家都很着急,也会要求老师在时间充裕的时候早一点帮同学改完,希望在不久的一个月内为大家推出优惠套餐.

  我记下你的用户名了,如果下次提交作文,我会安排这位老师再帮你批改:)

57 学分

2014-09-24 20:45:09 来自: danielztt 和他聊聊 藤椅

  非常感谢你的反馈!   我们也在计划推出批改套餐,让同学们改作文更实惠一些, 知道大家都很着急,也会要求老师在时间充裕的时候早一点帮同学改完,希望在不久的一...koopigai

谢谢。很期待,会继续在这练习提高!

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