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[真题机经] 2012年1月12日GRE作文考试回忆

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 Issue
    1  Colleges  and  universities  should  require  their  students  to  spend  at  least  one semester studying in a foreign country.
  2  critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless 是from someone who expert in that field
  3  Should government officials execute wills by personal decision, or, should they execute the wills of the people which they serve?
  Argument
  1、The following appeared on the Mozart School of Music Web site.
  "The Mozart School of Music should be the first choice for parents considering enrolling their child in music lessons. First of all, the Mozart School welcomes youngsters at all ability and age levels; there is no audition to attend the school. Second, the school offers instruction in nearly all musical instruments as well a wide range of styles and genres from classical to rock. Third, the faculty includes some of the most distinguished musicians in the area. Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional musicians."
  2、一个F地区的居民的生活方式 比20年前健康了, 是根据一个调查 说大家的饮食习惯更符合政府的recommendation了。然后 有一种健康的food销量增加了, 一中 最健康的人中的few消费的一种不健康的食物销量减少了。
  3、Aiming Conclusion:
  School should provide free and commanded driving instruction as the only solution to the problem of increasing number of car accidents involving teenagers.
  Reasons:
  a) Some parents are too busy to provide such instructions.
  b) Some parents are too poor to send their children to private institutions
  for such instructions.
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